Write a Mystery 104: Suspects, Clues, Red Herrings

November 2, 2025 by Laura Leave a Comment

Write a Mystery 104: Suspects, Clues, Red Herrings

In episode 243, “Write a Mystery 104: Suspects, Clues, & Red Herrings,” Meredith Curtis talks about those ingredients that make a mystery fun. Mystery writers, it’s time to create suspects and all those clues that lead the detective and reader to unmask the criminal, and the red herrings that lead them astray. In a classic who dun it, the writer keeps the reader guessing until the end. That requires motive, means, and opportunity. While super fun, it also requires careful plotting out so that you reader can solve a puzzle along with your detective.

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Show Notes

Crime committed, usually a murder. Clues & red herrings followed by detective & readers who try their hardest to guess the perpetrator. At the end of the story, justice is served.

Suspects

Characters should always be well-rounded.

The Real Murderer’s identity isn’t revealed until the end of the book.

Other Suspects must have motive, means, opportunity, too.

Victim – why would someone kill him/her?

Show not Tell.

Don’t tell us about your characters when you write, show us. It is better for a writer to show your readers your characters, their personalities, and their emotions through dialogue or actions.

Scared
Pain
Sad
Cold
Angry

Relationships (and hidden ones too)

Clues/Red Herrings

Your reader wants to solve the mystery with your detective. You will plant clues for your detective to discover right along with your reader.

Clues reveal information about the murderer, the crime, the motives for murder, and the character of the victim and suspects.

A clue brings the detective and reader closer to solving the mystery. A red herring leads the detective and reader in the wrong direction or to the wrong suspect. That’s the only difference.

Your cozy mystery will be filled with clues and red herrings that lead the detective and reader on a wild goose chase. Sometimes the murderer will plant false clues (red herrings) to lead the detective in another direction away from himself.

Who will solve the mystery first?

Clues can be hard to come up with when you first start writing a cozy mystery.

List of clues/red herrings that you can use in your story. (you’ll have to listen to get it)

For step-by-step help in creating your own murder mystery, grab your copy of Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis

Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis is a one-credit high school English course.

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Write a Mystery 103: Classic Who Dun It Plot

October 20, 2025 by Laura Leave a Comment

Write a Mystery 103: Classic Who Dun It Plot

In episode 242, “Write a Mystery 103: Classic Who Dun It Plot,” Meredith Curtis brings you to the next step on your storytelling journey. Mystery writers, it’s time to create a plot. The classic who dun it plot goes beyond the inciting incident, rising action, climax, and resolution. It keeps the reader guessing who the criminal is until the end.

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Show Notes

Crime committed, usually a murder. Clues & red herrings followed by detective & readers who try their hardest to guess the perpetrator. At the end of the story, justice is served.

Classic Plot

Plot is what makes a story a story. Stories have action, movement, a beginning, and an ending.

A story moves from the initial scenario to the climax to the final conclusion. The plot, or story line, pulls us into the lives of the characters through their words and actions during the adventure. Every story is made up of a series of incidents that are related to each other.

Conflict is the Heart of a Story

Conflict is the heart of the story. This is where you find out who the “good guys” are and who the “enemy” is. There is no plot without this dramatic struggle between the main character and an opposing force in the story. Conflict can be external (human versus human, human versus nature, human versus society) or internal (human versus self). Conflict is often introduced early on in the story, sometimes in the opening pages.

In a murder mystery, the battle of wits is between the detective and the unknown murderer.

Scenes

I like to think of the plot, or storyline, in terms of scenes. One chapter may have several scenes.

Classic Mystery Plot

Introduce Normal

Show what normal life looks like in the first scene, introduce main characters (can be done in 1 chapter or less than a chapter. The stage is now set for the story to begin.

Teatime Trouble – Maggie & Matt move to Hopeville for Matt to start seminary.

In Third Girl, young woman Norma Restarick seeks help from Poirot, believing she may have committed murder.

Inciting Incident

Crime or murder happens. Clues at the scene. Suspects.

Teatime Trouble

In Third Girl

Conflict & Complications

Conflict between detective and criminal, trying to unmask murderer and bring to justice. Investigating suspects. Every suspect should have a motive. Clues & Red Herrings. Complications – personal things impacting detective, thus impacting investigation.

Teatime Trouble

In Third Girl

Climax

The moment you wait for in a movie, where the action is most intense (the chase scene in a detective television show!) is called the climax. You are at the edge of your chair for the climax. It is the turning point in the story. The main character comes face to face with a conflict and will change in some way as a result of the conflict. This is the final showdown that elicits the greatest emotion from the reader. The climax might be the murderer confronting the detective, trying to stop him from discovering his identity or the detective revealing the identity of the murderer. It is usually something along these lines.

Complications – personal things impacting detective, thus impacting investigation.

Resolution

The conclusion or ending of the story is where the story stops in a reasonable way that allows the reader to feel that the tale is through.

Justice is served. Things are resolved and/or clarified.

Teatime Trouble

In Third Girl

Back to Normal

I like to add a final scene to bring the amateur sleuth back to normal life. Think of a TV show with the ending scene.

Teatime Trouble

In Third Girl

For step-by-step help in creating your own murder mystery, grab your copy of Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis

Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis is a one-credit high school English course.

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Write a Mystery 102: Create a Detective

September 8, 2025 by Laura Leave a Comment

Write a Mystery 102: Create a Detective

In episode 239, “Write a Mystery 102: Create a Detective,” Meredith Curtis brings you to the next step on your storytelling journey. Mystery writers, it’s time to create a detective. He will be the protagonist, the one your readers will root for. Will it be a man or woman? Will he be a professional or an amateur sleuth? Are there different kinds of detectives? Yes! Discover which one appeals to you and fits in with the story you want to tell. We’ll talk about creating a backstory, relationships, day job, personality, and basic character. You are on your way to creating your own Who-Dun-It!

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Show Notes

Nancy Drew, Frank & Joe Hardy, Trixie Belden, Miss Marple, Hercule Poirot, Monk, Jessica Fletcher.

Last week, we talked about choosing a mystery genre. Today, we’ll talk about creating a detective. Just a reminder

Mystery Storyline Basics

Crime committed, usually a murder. Clues & red herrings followed by detective & reader who try their hardest to guess the perpetrator. At end, crime is punished.

Christian Worldview

We live in a fallen world, but God is Just. Justice.

God is a mystery writer, leaving clues about Jesus throughout the OT.

Kinds of Detective

Part of a Team

Maybe the leader, or ‘star’ of the team or partnership, working with others to solve a case. Include forensics, interviews, etc. in a professional setting.

CSI, Blue Bloods, NCIS,

(Vintage) Dragnet, Adam 12, Hawaii 5-0

Police Detective

Lead Police Detective, with helpers, who solves the case. May have power struggle with other officers.

(Vintage) Columbo, Inspector Morse, Dick Tracy, Detective Chief-Inspector Roderick Alleyn, Walker Texas Ranger,

Private Investigator

Professional, licensed detective. Not a police officer but can be a retired officer. Relationship with official police can be good or bad. Solves the case with traditional and/or unique methods.

(Vintage) Hercule Poirot, Sherlock Holmes, Magnum PI, Monk, Psych, Remington Steel, Tommy & Tuppence Beresford, Canon

Spies

Can be FBI, CIA, MI6, Naval Intelligence, etc.

Jack Ryan, Agents of Shield, Numb3rs

(Vintage) Scarecrow & Mrs. King, MacGyver, It Takes a Thief, The Wild, Wild West, Mission Impossible,

Lawyer

His (or her) client is accused of murder or other crime so must figure out who the actual perpetrator is.

(Vintage) Perry Mason, Matlock

Amateur Sleuth

Stumbles into a case, follows clues to solve case when officials cannot. Good or bad relationship with police. Has a day job.

Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, Encyclopedia Brown, Murder She Wrote, Miss Marple, Father Brown, Lord Peter Wimsey

Teams: Sister Boniface, Rosemary & Thyme

Backstory

How did your sleuth start solving mysteries? Is this the backstory?

Relationships

Family
Friends
Business Relationships
Other (landlord, customers, pastor)

Examples of relationships & locations

Garage Sale Mysteries – Jennifer Shannon, husband Jason, son Logan, daughter Hannah, Detective Lynwood, co-worker Dani

Locations – home, antique shop, diner, garage sales, police station

Maggie King Mysteries – Maggie, husband Matt, toddler Bethany, friends Anika & Erik, Miss Lucy, Jack & Betty,

Locations – home, playground, Tidewater Treats, library, church

Sister Boniface Mysteries – Sister Boniface, Police Sam, Felix, & Penny, Mrs. Clam (landlord), Reverend Mother

Locations – Abby, Police Station, Village

Relationship with Police in Father Brown vs. Sister Boniface

For step-by-step help in creating your own murder mystery, grab your copy of Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis

Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis is a one-credit high school English course.

For step-by-step help in creating your own murder mystery, grab your copy of Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis

Who Dun It Murder Mystery Literature & Writing Volume II by Meredith Curtis is a one-credit high school English course.

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Day Job

Can run a business – bookstore, bakery, craft shop, businessman, accountant, cashier, vet, doctor, nurse, park ranger, farmer, ballerina, student

Maggie – SAHM, Jessica – Writer, Matlock – Lawyer,

Game we play

Personality

Introvert vs Extrovert, Silly vs Serious, Late vs. On Time, Big Picture vs. Detail,

Game We Play – what would your character do?

Character

Christian or no? Godly or struggling?

What hills will they die on?

No person is perfect. Where do they struggle?

Quirks

Quirks help your detective to be relatable and believable.

Monk – OCD, Shaun Spencer (Psych) – Irresponsible, Miss Marple – nosy, gossipy, Trixie Beldon – forgets to obey, Matlock – stingy,

That Something Special

Most detectives have serious observation and thinking skills, notice details & put them together (Sherlock Holmes, Shaun Spenser trained by his dad, Monk, Columbo, Death in Paradise detectives)

CSI, Bones, NCIS use scientific research – still add an uncanny ability to dig out facts

Miss Marple & Jessica Fletcher – conversation, un-noticed

Gus (Psych) – sense of smell

Sidekick

Best friend, spouse, co-worker, parent, child

Dr. Watson, Hastings, Gus, Natalie or Sharona, Della & Paul, Rick & TC & Higgins

Anika & Miss Lucy & Detective Walker

Information Sheets on Each Character

Help you remember all the details

Don’t want your detective to have blue eyes and unruly curls in chapter 2 and straight blond hair and brown eyes in chapter 12.

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Maggie & Matt King move to Hopeville, Virginia so Matt can go to seminary, studying to be a pastor. Maggie is a SAHM to Bethany (and more children to come) but finds time to stumble across dead bodies and unmask the murderer. Eventually, Maggie will homeschool her children and enjoy her role as a pastor’s wife. But, she doesn’t stop solving mysteries. Enjoy her adventures. Wholesome Christian Cozy Mysteries.

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Write a Mystery 101: Choose Your Genre

August 18, 2025 by Laura Leave a Comment

Write a Mystery 101: Choose Your Genre

In episode 238, “Write a Mystery 101: Choose Your Genre,” Meredith Curtis starts you on your storytelling journey. So, you’ve decided to write your own mystery. Congrats! What a fun project. Let’s start with what kind of mystery you want to write. Are their different kinds of mysteries? Yes! Discover which one appeals to you, and start on your way to creating your own Who-Dun-It.

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